I have been drawing my pages for A Crying Shame and it felt like there is scope for me to add more narrative detail, my whole driving force currently is to be more vulnerable in my work. I'm also consciously writing in my own house, to convey my experiences in a more authentic way.
With this i mind, I have gone back into my script and reworked a few areas, and added in more pages briefly touching on my therapy journey, as well as some personal revelations.
The whole thing now comes in at 18 pages of narratives and illustration, which feels more substation.
Below is example dummy page scans. I used the new script to roughly map out panels.
